claustrophobia

---

![[_resources/Pasted image 20250919090912.png]]

![[_resources/Pasted image 20250919154007.png]]

---

clear structure: visual(color and image), text interplay Crit A: good integration of evidence by using partial quotes and depict of visual elements; grasped the intention to increase physical activities Crit B: good depth of analysis, explicit analysis of effect on audience and connection to context; could use more devices, like allusion of color, to achieve 7 Crit C: clear structure, but can use more fancy transition Crit D: can use more formal and professional language of more variety to achieve 7